Saturday, December 21, 2019

Girl in Trouble: a mystery that's hard to care about

Girl in Trouble by Stacy Chaflin is the first book in the Alex Mercer Thriller series. It is the story of Alex Mercer who is a self-described deadbeat dad and loser. His daughter, Ariana, was adopted by her mother’s, Zoey, parents as both Alex and Zoey were 16 at the time of her birth and wanted to give her a better chance at a decent life. One night, Alex takes Ariana to a popular hangout for kids. After an evening of fun and excitement, Alex witnesses Ariana being taken by a man in a dirty SUV. As investigation gets started, Alex must deal with the criticisms of those who blame him while he tries to track down the man who took his daughter and finding Ariana alive. Will he find her in time? Will they discover the identity of the man who took her?


When I read the description of Girl in Trouble, I was intrigued; however, the book fails to live up to its description. From the get-go, I found myself uninterested in the characters. Alex’s self-loathing is annoying. Zoey’s meanness and bitchiness were irritating. The opening chapters were bored and failed to truly draw me into the drama. The book is described as a thriller but there was nothing thrilling about it. I was also disturbed by the number of chapters. 82 in a 365-page book. That is just too many. The chapters are too short for any real action to take place. Once something starts to happen, the chapter ends, and the reader is taken to a new scene and different action. It was hard to stay engaged. I do not recommend Girl in Trouble.

Girl in Trouble
is available in paperback, eBook, and audiobook

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